Asa Reloaded 22: Sibling Rivalry 12-4

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Asa Reloaded 22: Sibling Rivalry 12-4

Postby Aaroc200 on June 14th, 2009, 3:55 pm

Hello all, I've scrapped my old Asa Legacy and I now present to you, Aaroc's Asa Aaroc-Legacy Reloaded!

I'll keep the old chapter links up here just because, but they won't be updated any more. For now, here are the New Chapters, as well as my Scorecard:

Scorecard: 33 Points.
Part 1: Reloaded
Part 2: Forbidden
Part 3: Rising High
Part 3.5: Ketchup
Part 4: A Wedneral Party.
Part 5: Lotsa Logic.
Part 6: Babination.
Part 7: Babies 'n Birthdays.
Part 8: Mishaps.
Part 9: More Mishaps.
Part 10: Teens and LTWs.
Part 11: Troubled Tutor.
Part 12: The Pitter Patter of New Feet.
Part 13: Evil Eyes.
Part 14: Point Plethora.
Part 15: Where's Feralas?
Part 16: West of Thousand Needles.
Part 17: Celebrity What?
Part 18: The Unwilling Bride.
Part 19: Invasion of the Clones.
Part 20: Quit Bein' Creepy.
Part 21: Score!
Part 22: Sibling Rivalry


Old Chapters from the Original:
Spoiler:
Part 1: The First Day
Part 2: Invigorating
Part 3: Hot Stuff
Part 4: The Barren Widow


Enjoy!

To see the rules that I am using, Click Here.
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, new, 6-14

Postby PrincessMajestic on June 15th, 2009, 5:55 pm

That was good!

Spoiler:
It ended a little abruptly, but I still liked it. Agnes Crumplebottom was a strange person to end up with, but they are both frugal. Interesting Sim appearance. :)
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, new, 6-14

Postby Jennifer on June 15th, 2009, 11:13 pm

Spoiler:
*Gasp* Was that Crumplebottom? Kissing? In public?? Quick! Somebody hit her with a purse!!!
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, new, 6-14

Postby lizziemay on June 16th, 2009, 3:59 am

Very good. And like said it has an extremely abrupt ending, but still makes the reader pose many, many questions.

I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter.


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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-16

Postby Aaroc200 on June 16th, 2009, 11:39 am

I'm glad you guys liked it. I have the second part up now.

I've decided to keep my updates short and sweet, so that pretty much one or two big things happen and that's is. I'm really trying to actually document my sims' lives instead of just the typical So and so had a baby, the baby grew up, got married, and had a baby, and so on. I actually have five parts sitting saved in .txt format ready to be copied and pasted into LJ, but I want to release them slowly so that I can write and play this Legacy as well as my Nunya Legacy without updates for either coming out too slowly. Due to the way I played this Legacy, however, it may seem very slowgoing until the second generation hits adulthood.
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-16

Postby galaxico on June 16th, 2009, 6:01 pm

This is a great start and I'm enjoying reading this legacy! I like your approach and you documenting your sims' lives, like you said. I often have to remind myself to do that =P Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading ^^
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-16

Postby ArchimedesMinor on June 17th, 2009, 1:19 am

The erupt endings made me lol! Great story anyhow, I can't wait for more chapters.

p.s: Tan rules :)
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-16

Postby Aaroc200 on June 18th, 2009, 10:38 am

Part 3 is now up Here!

Enjoy. Thanks for the comments.
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-18

Postby Scoob94P on June 18th, 2009, 10:43 am

Another good update, I like the way you do the updates quickly so they're like mini-stories of what's been going on in Tanaris' world for a few days.
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-18

Postby Aaroc200 on June 18th, 2009, 11:11 am

Thanks. I like the way I'm doing it too. It kinda bugged me in TS2 when I would have a party, for example, but I was using the exchange so I could really only make a brief mention of said party. Now, with the way I'm writing up this Legacy, I can make a whole update about just the party if I want to, especially if a lot of stuff happens during said party, you know? I think doing the "mini-updates" likes this gives me a little more freedom as a writer.
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-18

Postby graycurse on June 18th, 2009, 10:21 pm

I like they way you're doing this, it's a nice change from the long drawn-out chapters (like mine :( ). I love the last line of chapter 3 haha.
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-18

Postby hugaloaf on June 19th, 2009, 8:29 am

I really like this. And I think your "short and sweet" writing style is refreshing. :)
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-18

Postby sowski143 on June 19th, 2009, 11:13 am

Hey Aaroc...your Asa legacy is really good! I like your interactions with the characters, it's very natural. I'm a Sims newbie, so I'm learning alot about how to play the game just by reading your stuff! Thanks!
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-18

Postby Aaroc200 on June 21st, 2009, 1:16 pm

Thanks guys. I like feedback because it helps me figure out what my readers are enjoying and what they aren't enjoying so much. I suppose I can't help but be informative while writing sim stories.. I think that's my superiority complex showing itself, but I'm glad it's doing you good, sowski.

I'm back from New Jersey for my drill weekend with the National Guard, and I have a new chapter up for you guys.

Enjoy!
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-18

Postby PShortie on June 21st, 2009, 1:58 pm

I really enjoyed reading the beginning your legacy, i like your style of writing :)
Hope you get another update out quickly! :D
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-18

Postby Aaroc200 on June 21st, 2009, 2:35 pm

Since the Official rules came out, my Legacy is apparently now invalid. I don't care much though since it's my game and I'm going to play how I want.
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Legacy, updated, 6-21

Postby Aaroc200 on June 23rd, 2009, 10:43 pm

Bleh. unfortunately I've decided that I'm going to Reload this Legacy. That is to say I'm going to start over again from the beginning. I really want to be able to achieve every LTW before the end of the Legacy, but due to the way I played the first and second generations, that's looking like it may not happen now.

Fortunately, Tanaris will be founding the Legacy again, which means I'll get to play with him again. In the current incarnation, I actually just played to the point where he died and gen 3 was born.

I'm going to use this same thread for the Reloaded version.
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Aaroc-Legacy Reloaded! 6-25

Postby Aaroc200 on June 25th, 2009, 2:12 pm

I have Reloaded my Asa Legacy. It is now Aaroc's Asa Aaroc-Legacy Reloaded!

Part 1: Reloaded, is up. Enjoy.

Be on the lookout for part 2, coming to an LJ near you!
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Aaroc-Legacy Reloaded! 6-25

Postby MsJessica on June 25th, 2009, 2:23 pm

I'm enjoying it! Good luck!
Look - it's another legacy (and a work in progress!)
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Re: Aaroc's Asa Aaroc-Legacy Reloaded! 6-25

Postby Aaroc200 on June 25th, 2009, 5:42 pm

Thanks MsJessica. Part 2 is out. I don't think I have enough pictures remaining at the present time to put out a third, but we'll see.

Enjoy
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